Contents… The two men, The Giant, Characters… The Giant, The two men, The king. Chapter one: The two men. Once there was a king And he had two men and his men have been through plenty of War. They had scratches and scars and everything like that. One time, after a war, the king gave the two men their own horses. One day, when the two men had free time, they went for a ride in the woods with their horses And they found a Stone Arch. Chapter two: The Giant. There was a giant living under the stone arch but the two men didn't notice so they just went on. The giant was asleep but when the horses went along he heard them and woke up and grumbled. "who's walking on my Bridge?" The giant voice echoed through the trees. The horses were frightened so they ran away. When the two men got back to the castle one said to the other, "tomorrow we will find who made our horses run away." So they got ready for tomorrow. The next day they went to the arch and they looked around. They saw nobody around. They crept over the bridge. They had heavy weapons, one of the men dropped his weapon and they made loud echoes on the stone arch. The giant woke up and repeated what he had said yesterday. "Who's walking on my Bridge?" Except he was louder this time. The two men asked, "who are you?" Very loudly. The giant replied, "I am the giant of the bridge and you are not allowed passed me!" The man said that they were not going to listening to the giant. The giant was angry so he came out from under the bridge. He knocked them out with his big log. The end.Thursday, March 26, 2020
The Giant War
Contents… The two men, The Giant, Characters… The Giant, The two men, The king. Chapter one: The two men. Once there was a king And he had two men and his men have been through plenty of War. They had scratches and scars and everything like that. One time, after a war, the king gave the two men their own horses. One day, when the two men had free time, they went for a ride in the woods with their horses And they found a Stone Arch. Chapter two: The Giant. There was a giant living under the stone arch but the two men didn't notice so they just went on. The giant was asleep but when the horses went along he heard them and woke up and grumbled. "who's walking on my Bridge?" The giant voice echoed through the trees. The horses were frightened so they ran away. When the two men got back to the castle one said to the other, "tomorrow we will find who made our horses run away." So they got ready for tomorrow. The next day they went to the arch and they looked around. They saw nobody around. They crept over the bridge. They had heavy weapons, one of the men dropped his weapon and they made loud echoes on the stone arch. The giant woke up and repeated what he had said yesterday. "Who's walking on my Bridge?" Except he was louder this time. The two men asked, "who are you?" Very loudly. The giant replied, "I am the giant of the bridge and you are not allowed passed me!" The man said that they were not going to listening to the giant. The giant was angry so he came out from under the bridge. He knocked them out with his big log. The end.
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Hi Anika, WOW what a great chapter story. I really like how you introduced the characters at the start and how you have used lots of "talking" by the characters. 'The giant voice echoed through the trees' is an excellent use of descriptive language. I look forward to your next story.
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool story. I really liked how you described the sounds. I could imagine the echo of the weapon as it feel onf the bridge. I wasn't expecting the twist at the end, it was really clever.
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